In my opinion, dolphins shouldn't be taken from their natural habitats.
In an aquarium there isn’t a lot of space, and it’s really boring to swim
around in circles. In the clear ocean water, they can swim as far as they
like.
around in circles. In the clear ocean water, they can swim as far as they
like.
In dolphin shows, they sometimes get hit in training, if they don’t do it
properly. I think that's just cruel, dolphins have feelings too.
properly. I think that's just cruel, dolphins have feelings too.
Also, if they take the dolphins away from the sea, into Sea World and
Kelly Tarltons, it would be like taking YOU away from home, to another
random place to live. That would make you feel lonely and sad.
Kelly Tarltons, it would be like taking YOU away from home, to another
random place to live. That would make you feel lonely and sad.
Instead of taking dolphins away for people to view, you could go on a
ferry and you might see dolphins playfully jumping out of the water and
scientists would be able to see dolphins in their natural habitat, not in a
squishy little aquarium.
ferry and you might see dolphins playfully jumping out of the water and
scientists would be able to see dolphins in their natural habitat, not in a
squishy little aquarium.
Dolphins shouldn’t be taken from their homes, stuck in a tiny little
aquarium makes them bored, and they also don’t have freedom. It’s like
being stuck in a small room for your entire life.
If you are about to put a dolphin in an aquarium since you are a scientist,
you might want to reconsider.
aquarium makes them bored, and they also don’t have freedom. It’s like
being stuck in a small room for your entire life.
If you are about to put a dolphin in an aquarium since you are a scientist,
you might want to reconsider.
Lots of great reasons. Well done with your research and formulating your arguments.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Cassie. There was lot of good reasons not to put dolphins in an aquarium and I also liked the ending.
ReplyDeleteWow Cassie,lots of interesting facts about Dolphins!I agree with you.Dolphins shouldn't be stuck in a tiny aquarium😀👍.
ReplyDeleteWOW Cassie your story was so interesting I love reading it.
ReplyDeleteBy:Alice
Well done Cassie. your story is very interesting.
ReplyDeleteKa pai
Tino pai Cassie! Congrats for being chosen to present at assemble.
ReplyDeleteBy Sophia
Tino pai Cassie it was very interesting and good punchashin too
ReplyDeleteVery good Cassie-the title looks appealing and the conclusion does wrap the story up. The adjectives make the story more colourful(eg. SQUISHY LITTLE aquarium).
ReplyDeleteYou could lengthen or just make the first line more interesting by doing:
In my opinion, dolphins shouldn't be taken from their natural habitat BECAUSE...
But that was just a suggestion-you don't have to do it.
The story is great Cassie. I like the writing and good punchashin too.
ReplyDeleteWow so many reasons Cassie,you even have the punctuation all right!
ReplyDeleteka pai! Cassie great work.
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